Helpful Posts Helpful Posts:  0
Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Male Portrait V

  1. #1
    Digital's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    Carrollton, Georgia (USA)
    Posts
    2,757
    Real Name
    Bruce

    Male Portrait V

    C&C welcomed. Bruce

    Male Portrait V

  2. #2
    Moderator Manfred M's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    22,159
    Real Name
    Manfred Mueller

    Re: Male Portrait V

    A few thoughts for you on this image, Bruce:

    1. I like the pose and the framing. He looks like an interesting character with interesting stories to tell. You have captured that well.

    2. You have discovered the issues when shooting people wearing a hat; the brim will cast a shadow on the subject's face. Fill light from underneath is the best way to counter that, although PP will help here too.

    3. I find the image is too cool and has a bit of a blue colour cast. I find portraits usually look better when they are just a bit on the warmer side of neutral.

    Male Portrait V

  3. #3
    billtils's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2015
    Location
    Scotland
    Posts
    2,875
    Real Name
    Bill

    Re: Male Portrait V

    Nice one Bruce, but a +1 to Manfred's comments

  4. #4
    Shadowman's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    WNY
    Posts
    36,716
    Real Name
    John

    Re: Male Portrait V

    Nice effort.

  5. #5
    DanK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    New England
    Posts
    8,826
    Real Name
    Dan

    Male Portrait V

    +1 to Manfred’s comments. The shadow is particularly an issue because it includes the eyes. That’s hard to fix in PP, because one often wants some catchlight in the eyes. Fill flash would be the best, I think.


    Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk
    Last edited by DanK; 6th November 2017 at 12:43 PM.

  6. #6
    Moderator Manfred M's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    22,159
    Real Name
    Manfred Mueller

    Re: Male Portrait V

    Quote Originally Posted by DanK View Post
    Fill flash would be the best, I think.
    Removing the hat is the easiest solution....

    If that is not possible:

    1. I find that having the subject hold a white piece of foam core angled up a bit is usually easier than using a fill flash. My original piece of foam core was the back side of a display boards for a school project that one of my daughters had used. That will bounce ambient light and scattered light from the flash.

    2. Fill flash is possible, but then you need a second flash, a light stand, a light modifier, method of triggering the second flash, etc.

  7. #7
    Digital's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    Carrollton, Georgia (USA)
    Posts
    2,757
    Real Name
    Bruce

    Re: Male Portrait V

    Manfred, I knew the eyes were an issue; attempted to give a little more exposure in LR: however the eyes looked a little "funky". I appreciate the kind comments. You are right: this fellow is an interesting "character".

    Bill, John, and Dan, thank you for viewing, and commenting.

    Bruce

  8. #8
    Digital's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    Carrollton, Georgia (USA)
    Posts
    2,757
    Real Name
    Bruce

    Re: Male Portrait V

    Burned the eyes a bit. C&C most welcomed. Bruce


    Male Portrait V
    Last edited by Digital; 7th November 2017 at 02:38 AM.

Tags for this Thread

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •