St David's Head mono C and C welcome

[Davejl]

The weather had turned very overcast when I got here but there was some interesting cloud. Not sure if this works in black and white, but it is certainly no good in colour!

[Geoff F]

I wonder about a slight crop from the sky and right side; or alternatively from the bottom and right side? Otherwise this looks good to me.

[Davejl]

I wonder about a slight crop from the sky and right side; or alternatively from the bottom and right side? Otherwise this looks good to me.

Thanks for your suggestions Geoff. I think I’d go for cropping at bottom slightly if I did crop, and probably cut off the dark rock at right too, just left of where it angles back.

[ceylonshoe]

I think it works well. If anything, suggest darkening the light rock in the foreground just a bit so it blends better with the rest of the f/g.

[Davejl]

I think it works well. If anything, suggest darkening the light rock in the foreground just a bit so it blends better with the rest of the f/g.

Thank you for your suggestion Noel.

[Geoff F]

Yes, a slight left side crop would also work. It is just that at the moment the sky and foreground seem to have equal importance so they are 'competing with each other' for importance. In colour, one of them would probably be obviously the most important.

[Davejl]

Yes, a slight left side crop would also work. It is just that at the moment the sky and foreground seem to have equal importance so they are 'competing with each other' for importance. In colour, one of them would probably be obviously the most important.

I think this is maybe better.

[Shadowman]

Nice shot.

[Geoff F]

That edit looks good to me.