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Thread: Contemplation
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16th December 2017, 02:31 AM #1
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16th December 2017, 03:13 AM #2
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Re: Contemplation
I like the model Bruce. A sweet looking man. But I think the crop is too tight. His eyes also look unfocused to me.
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C&C most welcomed. Bruce
I’m not a portrait taker so please keep that in mind regarding my comments.
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16th December 2017, 07:35 AM #3
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Re: Contemplation
Agree with Sharon on her comments, there is also distracting reflections on the glasses. Nice effort. That split background is a bit odd looking also.
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16th December 2017, 02:07 PM #4Moderator
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Re: Contemplation
The problem with this shot is primarily the overall softness that the reflection from the glasses is giving to the eyes. The moment the eyes are not sharp, the image is not going to work all that well.
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