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IS)100, F/16, two seconds, natural light
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4th February 2018, 03:36 PM #1
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Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
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5th February 2018, 03:12 AM #2
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
How about a close-up?
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5th February 2018, 03:54 AM #3
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
the shot is only 2 inches wide
Originally Posted by Wavelength
How about a close-up?
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5th February 2018, 11:14 AM #4
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
Excellent detail when viewed large. A bit of cropping would be a vast improvement overall.
The blessing is there whether one notices or not. Seeing it is a step on the path to enlightenment.
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5th February 2018, 11:54 AM #5
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
true. Originally Posted by NorthernFocus
Excellent detail when viewed large. A bit of cropping would be a vast improvement overall.
The blessing is there whether one notices or not. Seeing it is a step on the path to enlightenment.
How would you crop it?
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5th February 2018, 08:35 PM #6
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
Either square or a 4x5. To focus attention on the bloom and remove the leaves that don't add to the image. Originally Posted by JBW
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5th February 2018, 11:41 PM #7
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
I shall play around with the crop. Originally Posted by NorthernFocus
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5th February 2018, 11:45 PM #8Moderator
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
+1 to Dan's thoughts Brian. That suggestion popped into my mind as soon as I looked at the image. If something is not contributing to the image, removing it often gives a stronger composition.
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6th February 2018, 03:16 AM #9
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
It was suggested a different crop would improve things. A crop plus an overehaul in pp gives this result: Originally Posted by JBW
IS)100, F/16, two seconds, natural light
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6th February 2018, 03:24 AM #10
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
Yes, that crop works much better Brian.
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6th February 2018, 02:21 PM #11
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
Mobetta IMO
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6th February 2018, 02:25 PM #12Moderator
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Re: Tis no blessing to be surrounded by beauty unless you notice it
Definitely better. If it were my shot I would probably go even tighter.
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