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    Pastel (better at full size)

    Pastel (better at full size)

    As I await the arrival of the new camera I work on my studio skills. A small antique glass jar filled with air bubbles is held on a polished pale green stone hand built to hold a cell phone. Backed by pale burnt orange.

    ISO 100 ~ Shutter Exposure Thirty (30) Seconds ~ F/14 ~ No Flashlights ~ Lighting Was What Was In The Room

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    I thought that was a hand in the background, I wonder if the composition would work better if the hand were less recognizable?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    I thought that was a hand in the background, I wonder if the composition would work better if the hand were less recognizable?
    I'm not sure how to do that?

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    This one is not working at all for me. The busy background overwhelms the simple jar.

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    The image is not loading (for me).

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    Quote Originally Posted by billtils View Post
    The image is not loading (for me).
    my blog where I got the image from has gone west. I have no idea why. Perhaps that is the reason you can't see it? I will try reposting tomorrow.

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    Brian - I can see it.

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    I think your first image was better, it just needed more space around jar.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    Quote Originally Posted by Manfred M View Post
    This one is not working at all for me. The busy background overwhelms the simple jar.
    The jar is not simple and the background is not busy. You should get some rest.

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    Re: Pastel (better at full size)

    Quote Originally Posted by mugge View Post
    I think your first image was better, it just needed more space around jar.
    Cheers Ole
    I did not crop the first image. It was restricted in width by the setup. So I set it up this way and got greater width and more colour.

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