Looks OK, Marie. Maybe, if possible, I would have liked to see just a fraction more at the bottom; but perhaps you had to exclude something?
I definitely prefer your second version. That looks good to me
I definitely prefer your first version, Marie. The undulating effect of the hill is not as effective in the second.
That being said, I understand your comment; both images seem to be missing something and I suspect it is that the shots looks truncated and incomplete.
Like the others before me, trees without feet.
I think it's a wonderful subject for a pano but you should have used a smaller focal length. You used a 70-200 at 200.
If it's in your neighbourhood, try it again. And maybe play with the idea to make a pano: more shots with an overlay of about 30%. Use Microsoft ICE to make the pano of them. It's free and good.
George
Nice image.
It's a nice scene, Marie. I prefer the second version. Trees rooted in the earth
Manfred, there was never any good place to crop it.
Marie