Yes, a little bit tight at the top; but otherwise quite acceptable.
See if you can bring up the interior detail and light. I am not sure what program you use. To illustrate: I did quick convert in Capture One by masking the interior bits and lightening them up with the Shadows tool then doing a bit of a curve to drop the brighter areas.
Go a bit wild with the sliders (?) in post processing just to experiment and learn. The best learning technique as far as I am concerned
Thanks for taking the time to teach and edit. Looks great.
I left it pretty much alone straight out of camera since I was using acros film sim. I’m trying to get to a point where I can just use my jpegs with these film sims. Nothing special with the photograph other than some tough lighting and a way to learn. I did indeed get it a little more underexposed than I wanted, but wanted a bit of mystery too.
Thanks again for your time.
Nicely processed, the sky is a bit unnatural though.