Originally Posted by
FootLoose
Much better, Manfred.
In the second set:
#1 the orange object in the background is a bit of any eye-magnet.
#2. That's an unfortunate pose. She seems to be straining to hold that position as her belly fat is forcing over the top of the pants. And while the camo.s match the bonnet of the wreck, they disguise the lines of her legs making her thigh seem much larger than it is.
#3. Nice use of diagonal composition
#4. The most successful imho as it has a good balance between background and foreground objects.
Manfred, did you ask the model to look directly at the camera in every shot? Some variation would be nice.