Last edited by Manfred M; 25th June 2018 at 04:30 AM.
Nicely done, great prop.
She does seem more relaxed, Manfred.
I like the old car, the greenery as a backdrop, I do just find myself with an hmmmm about the model.
Her clothing and posing suggest to me a more dark, moody lighting setting
The backdrop and prop to me would sync better with a flowing summery frock and lighter level of makeup
The 2 don’t work as well together in my opinion.
I find the setting problematic. The greenery is very close and hence mostly in focus, or close to it. I find it a bit distracting, particularly in #2.
That was definitely a problem with the shoot. I joked to the others that the next time I would have to include a weed trimmer and machete in my camera bag. We tried to stomp down the things growing in the foreground, but there is only so much one can do with the tiny saw built into a Swiss Army Knife, which was the largest tool we had along.
As you know Manfred, this is not really my genre so, although I am fascinated by your shoots, I have little usefull to say or contribute.
Just this once though I find myself bothered by #2. It took a minute or two, but somewhat perversely I realised that I find her block heeled shoe distracting, and for me it somehow 'unbalances' the the image. I have the distinct feeling that it would have been more 'harmonious' if she were barefooted?