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30th June 2018, 02:17 AM
#1
You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
C&C very welcomed.
Bruce
Last edited by Digital; 30th June 2018 at 02:30 AM.
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30th June 2018, 04:29 PM
#2
Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
Nice concept--there are two compositional alterations that might help realize your concept:
1. crop from the left so that the geese are not centered--this gives the goose looking right more to look at and is consistent with the way most western folks enter a photo--left to right, unless they have seen it all at one glance when things are centered.
2. add a little to the top to give the geese a larger canvas in which to be looking. This can easily be3 done in post given your background is simple.
you might also consider getting rid of a few of the white dots in the water, not the feathers. Particularly those between the necks of the geese.
Thanks for sharing!
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30th June 2018, 04:42 PM
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Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
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1st July 2018, 01:15 AM
#4
Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
Judith, thanks for viewing, and your very kind comments. I like the photo the way it is so I probably will not alter it.
John, thank you for viewing, and your kind comment also.
Bruce
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1st July 2018, 04:43 AM
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Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
Nice image, Bruce. I think the crop Judith suggests would also draw more attention to the nice curved space between the two birds.
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1st July 2018, 10:09 PM
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Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
Do you think this is an improvement?
Bruce
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7th July 2018, 12:51 AM
#7
Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
Thank you for your comments, Judith,John, and Greg.
Bruce
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