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    You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    You watch the left, I'll watch the right.
    C&C very welcomed.


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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Nice concept--there are two compositional alterations that might help realize your concept:

    1. crop from the left so that the geese are not centered--this gives the goose looking right more to look at and is consistent with the way most western folks enter a photo--left to right, unless they have seen it all at one glance when things are centered.

    2. add a little to the top to give the geese a larger canvas in which to be looking. This can easily be3 done in post given your background is simple.

    you might also consider getting rid of a few of the white dots in the water, not the feathers. Particularly those between the necks of the geese.

    Thanks for sharing!

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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Very nice.

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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Judith, thanks for viewing, and your very kind comments. I like the photo the way it is so I probably will not alter it.

    John, thank you for viewing, and your kind comment also.


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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Nice image, Bruce. I think the crop Judith suggests would also draw more attention to the nice curved space between the two birds.

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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Do you think this is an improvement?

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    Re: You watch the left, I'll watch the right.

    Thank you for your comments, Judith,John, and Greg.


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