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Thread: "Copy Cat"
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3rd July 2018, 10:50 PM #1
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4th July 2018, 02:38 PM #2
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Re: "Copy Cat"
Nice concept! Consider taking off about half the top distance from the white duck to the top of the image and about half the distance to the right of the white duck. This may focus more tightly on the action you were attracted to. In addition consider dodging the smaller duck's head to get his/her eye to be more visible.
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Fun to find these compositions!Last edited by Urbanflyer; 4th July 2018 at 04:14 PM.
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4th July 2018, 03:51 PM #3
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Re: "Copy Cat"
Nice shot.
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4th July 2018, 07:18 PM #4
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I agree with a slight crop. There is some loss of feather detail on the back of the white duck but considering the lighting conditions this was probably impossible to avoid.
So, all in all, I like this scene.
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4th July 2018, 10:44 PM #5
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Re: "Copy Cat"
Any better?
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5th July 2018, 02:30 AM #6
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Do you think it is better? You are who matters!
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5th July 2018, 06:52 PM #7
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Well it looks better to me.
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6th July 2018, 02:41 AM #8
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Re: "Copy Cat"
The heavy concrete bar, i found a bit disturbing; otherwise nice
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7th July 2018, 12:38 AM #9
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Nandakumar, thank you for your comments.
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7th July 2018, 02:49 AM #10
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like the adjusted pic, yes, the concrete bar does break the flow . great title and nice capture.
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8th July 2018, 01:52 AM #11
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Re: "Copy Cat"
Raymond, thank you for your comments.
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