Hi Trevor,
It works and the colour is better, but I think that's because the colours attract our attention away from what I perceive as a slight "lack of DoF" issue; the knobbly bit closest to us isn't as sharp as I feel it ought to be (at least to my eyes).
I see from EXIF it was shot at f/5 at 200 iso,
with the benefit of hindsight, it is easy for me to suggest f/10 at 800 iso might have helped.
If mine, I'd have cloned out that little loop of bright twig intruding lower left corner, or severely 'burned' it.
HTH,
Dave
My little S100 is always on my belt