#2
She was pretty "harsh" with this one. I thought that there was a rhythm to it, with all of the details, that pulls me in. I, also, love the creamy bokeh on it and it gives me the happy feeling that I have when I see pinecones (anyone know what I'm talking about?) Anyway, she agrees that the line - being the darkest and boldest thing there - just pulls one in and right off again. Alas, I think that this is what most people see. Maybe there's another use for this somewhere.
#1 is the one that she said had rhythm. I asked about the bold line and she observed that the white flower on the left of the branch stops the line from leading out of the frame and pulls the viewer down and around and up and down. However, she thought it wasn't an arresting photo.
#1
This next photo, although she said it wasn't exciting, I observed her gasp when she came to it. I've seen others have the same reaction to it. Her insight was that the blue dot of specular highlight is what makes it "sing" because it's the complementary color to the mustard. She, also, noted that, not only is there a strong line leading off but that there's a huge "X" right in the middle which she noted is generally boring.
#3
Well, she agreed with the consensus of
everyone else that these next two are good but, although I like them, I think they're a little boring. The very important thing that she had to say was that these have contrast and contrast (i.e. a color next to it's complement) makes for a strong image.
#4
#5
I can't remember what she said about this but I love it's delicate "lacyness" and how the context isn't just blurred away. Either, I'm a genius
or I just have to learn or it's a matter of taste. I'll sleep on it.
#6