Originally Posted by
William W
I think that you have too many elements in your question. That’s another way of saying that I think that your question is flawed because there is an assumptive conclusion contained within it. I think that you tried to explain that . . . the contrasts and comparisons between the two sets of images are not about the effects and affects of artificial vs. natural light.
I hope this assists:
The first set of images tends to replicate what we would describe (classify) as “Product Photography”. The particular subset of Product Photography represented is “Catalogue Photography”
The second set of images resemble more a “Collectors’ Study”. They resemble ‘Portraiture of Inanimate Objects’.
Whether or not you realize it, I think that it is almost certain that your initial critique of your work is influenced by Product Photography that you have seen elsewhere. In your first series of images, if one were to critique those images solely as “Product Photography”, there are many flaws – and this might be unconscious on your part - I think you see those flaws.
I think that is a main reason why you think that the second series is more interesting; and I also think that is the origin of your other comment “Natural light makes images look warmer IMO. Perhaps thats why I like them best.”
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I think that you should choose and then write down HOW you want to present to the viewer your collection of watches.
This is the predicate of the "Artist’s Statement".
There is discussion of this topic on another thread, it used to be a sticky – anyway, in simple terms, I believe that the Artist’s Statement can be as simple as two or three sentences, simply stating: what you want to convey and how you will convey it.
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As an example, I collect (amongst other things): watches, fountain pens and cameras.
Recently I began photographing my Cameras. My aim was to: photograph each camera cleanly and alone; not use props; show artistic temperament; show technical skill by using natural light and a simple background.
That aim became the basis of my Artist’s Statement and the boundaries or rules that I need to obey: hence joy and stimulation not only from a good result, but also through the ‘doing’ of the task.
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In the long run, it doesn’t matter who likes what.
A critique is most valuable when it measured against the aims of the exercise.
What are your aims?
WW