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Thread: From Haiti with love III
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21st January 2019, 06:40 AM #1
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From Haiti with love III
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21st January 2019, 09:43 AM #2
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Re: From Haiti with love III
Nicely captured, would clone out the spec in hair.
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21st January 2019, 11:55 AM #3
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Re: From Haiti with love III
Nice Javier. Nice model, well lit (in my untutored opinion).
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21st January 2019, 02:18 PM #4Moderator
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Re: From Haiti with love III
Another nice shot of a lovely young lady, Javier.
Several things come to mind here, but the most obvious one is the distracting reflected light from the sequins on her dress. That pulls the viewer's eyes away from the face. A crop fixes that.
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21st January 2019, 07:50 PM #5
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Re: From Haiti with love III
Lovely shot. I like the cropped version better.
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21st January 2019, 11:07 PM #6
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Re: From Haiti with love III
I am just wondering how this would have looked if the light was at a lower angle and thus would not cast shadows on the face. Just wondering, mind you, this is a very nice portait!
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