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    Re: Summer Time

    Nice effort.

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    Re: Summer Time

    Nice image with a few small defects:

    1. Your subject is a person, not a plastic doll. Her face looks over-processed. Skin has texture so unless we see some, the image tends to look "wrong". Cut that back and you will get a far stronger image.

    2. You are too close to the edge on the left hand side. Open that up a bit more as it is a bit of a distraction.

    3. Placing her navel piercing so close to the bottom edge adds a distraction there.

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