But now to get back to the real business of photography
It makes it a no-goer for me. I think the shapes of that inner part of the flower (sorry, don't know the technical name), are so significant in a shot like this, that the whole thing needs to be there. That's one view. There may (will) be others.#1 The bottom is cut off so that there's no background. Is that just wrong?
#2 for me .. for the same basic reason as above. #2 has got that centre part in focus and clear as, I think, it needs to be.#2 & 3 I am thinking that #2 above would be "better" but I really like #3 best.
No. I love the colour, tone and texture you've got in this. I would not call it simple. If there was such a word, I would call it 'un-busy'. In my book that equals good. Uncluttered is probably the term I'm looking for.#4 Is the one above too simple?
I wonder how it would look if it had all been sharp, rather than having some of it out-of-focus? Not sure. Can't decide.#5 And, then, finally, I really had a lot to work with.
So, NO, they're not boring. They are nice to look at. They induce a sense of calmness.
Thanks, Katy.
Yes, #1 could do with a bit more light in the central area. I used a single studio lamp with a diffuser fitted, which gives a nice soft light, especially if it's close to the subject.
#2. This is quite good, but it looks a little flat to me. It's surprising what a difference some simple levels and curves wil do in Photoshop. Here's an edit of it.
Um . . . is there a wine appreciation section?
Gorgeous flowers, both of you -- I'm having my photography club over on Sunday for a macro shoot, and there will be orchids -- I'm going to learn from this thread and see what I can do.
Thanks, Donald! The slight trouble I had with these is that i don't like the center part tremendously much but I LOVE the subtle color of the petals and the movement and flow they have in their shape and pattern. I'm not sure what to do or think about that - is it even possible to make composition without that middle part? However, because of this, I focused on and exposed for the petal. Now, a good month or so, later, I wonder, could I have exposed for the petal, done an exposure lock and, then, focused on the middle? (I should say that I do love the fresh white of the "nub" in the center.)
Anyone could answer, it doesn't just have to be Donald (even though I hang on every word he says. )
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That is better, Rob! It's much more vivid - alive. I just put them side by side so that, maybe, I can see the difference better.
Is there such a thing as a very soft, less colorful photo? Is there a place for a soft "colorwash"? Would something like that EVER "read"? Is there a way to be very subtle and not get lost?
I'm sorry, I'm editing this post because I really have more questions. Do you mind?
(Maybe, this is a question for Rob?) Is it possible to have it glowing from the back AND have the front illuminated? or, am I not "seeing" things correctly?
I'm getting Light: Science and Magic, soon. Will the answer - or more options - just be in there?
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YES! (although, are there more ways, too?)
Oh, NO! Now, a whole new thing that I have to figure out and learn is dawning on me. eeeeeeek! Why does this work? I would love it without the bottle, too. Wouldn't it work then, also? Blarg and happy, at the same time!
Even though this is soft and washed - doesn't it still have that "depth" you were talking about?
(I have GOT to get back to my housework! )
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I think these photos are very pretty. I like #3 the best too. For me, I think it's the aperture.Are they all boring? Are they pretty or interesting? I really struggled between striking a balance between how soft and subtle they are in real life and making them "ping" in the photo more. There was so much in this flower to "work" with - I kind of didn't know what to do.
In conclusion, I've fiddled with these for over a month and can't decide what to think of or do with them.
Do you use a macro lens, and what about lights?
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Pono! Thanks so much for commenting! Nooooooo, I have no macro, just the kit lens. I get as close as i can with the tripod and my limited lens, squint my eyes, hyper focus, use mirror lockup and the 2 sec. timer and, then, crop. I think that it's a good way to learn while I wait and "earn my stripes".
I saw that you want a macro lens, too. The thought of the flora and fauna that you could practice on in Hawaii is exciting. Anyway, I WAS hoping that Santa might bring me that Canon 60mm macro but it looks doubtful, again. (Kay, I need to let Tom SEE me taking pictures of him on the John Deere!)
My lighting? I've always been tuned into what the light is doing - it's just this thing. If the light is good, I crowd by the window. I've got to work on what to do on cloudy days.
Thanks, again, for commenting!