Helpful Posts: I saw this opportunity a while ago, and wanted something to enhance the marvellous walls. This lady came along with her beau and I asked her to pose (a first for me). Wanted to capture the strong walls with a bit more humanity. Have just come back to this, with hopefully!! -- a bit more expertise, to project what I had in mind at that time.
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16th April 2019, 05:56 AM #1
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Very rough, but great potential! - lady at the Len Lye Centre
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16th April 2019, 08:35 AM #2
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Re: Very rough, but great potential! - lady at the Len Lye Centre
Nicely done.
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16th April 2019, 04:17 PM #3Moderator
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Re: Very rough, but great potential! - lady at the Len Lye Centre
The lady in the shot (and in fact everything in the shot) looks soft.
The metadata suggests a 1/8 second exposure, so that is your culprit. Your ISO is only 400, so you could have pushed that a lot harder to get a better shutter speed. Dealing with noise in PP is a lot easier than dealing with motion blur.
In terms of potential for a shoot, I would agree. The gray concrete and repeating patterns show great potential, but the technical aspects need to be fixed first.
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17th April 2019, 12:23 AM #4
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Re: Very rough, but great potential! - lady at the Len Lye Centre
I really like the composition but, as Manfred said, it is a bit soft.
Cheers Ole
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17th April 2019, 04:43 PM #5
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Re: Very rough, but great potential! - lady at the Len Lye Centre
The composition is excellent
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