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    House on Lake Carroll

    C&C welcomed.
    House on Lake Carroll

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    John, thank you for your comment.



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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    Nice summer scene. I would consider cropping off about half of the foregrounds water.

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    I would suggest the light is not doing you any favours here. The side of the house is in shadow and lacks form as a result. Try taking the same picture in early morning or evening where the light should bring out more redness in the house itself.

    ps. I would lose the half-duck or goose on the left !

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    I was thinking about cropping a bit more from the left. Maybe lose around 10% and a balancing amount from the bottom?

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    I suggest a more severe crop from the left- to about the 2d tree behind the house, and an appropriate amt from the bottom. Perhaps around the line where the smooth water ends and ripples begin.

    Thanks for sharing, Geoff.

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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    Here is an edited version of the house/lake.
    Peter, I agree with you about the light. I plan to retake this photo during the "Golden Hour" within the near future.
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    Re: House on Lake Carroll

    That looks like a better composition balance to me.

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