Could I improve this image? So far I gave performed general edits (eg crop, sharpen) and removed a distant aircraft that caught the eye. I also removed a vertical post in the water as it divided the ship's hull.
I considered cropping the partial crane on the right, but that would cut into the ship.
The image has a good distribution of all shades of grey. Are there areas I should be dodging and burning? The area around the ship's bridge is lighter and draws the eye a little but on the other hand it helps the viewer identify that there is a ship as well cranes in the picture.
Would another title be more appropriate?