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    bubbles and fun

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    Nice set.

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    The second one is a very strong image. Getting down to the subject's level has made this one.

    Personally I would crop out the crowd on the extreme right and clone out remains of the suitcase. I think this would centre the main subject more and give it even more impact.
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    Re: bubbles and fun

    I would echo what Peter has said, George, as it is what I would do. However, it may not be what you are aiming for. If you do want a strong image then let us know, a few additional tweaks could make a big difference.

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    For me, yes to losing the suitcase; but cropping the right side means having some large bubbles cut in two. If cropping, I think I would try a much tighter crop from the right and just leave a little of the girl's grey coat showing on the right side, possibly a square crop? That would retain whole bubbles and concentrate strongly on just one main subject.

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    In the first image that girl has a wet finger. I told her that if you have a wet finger from that soap you could put your finger in the bubble.

    I already cropped it on the right side. I did till that funny shaped bubble. Going further I would loose that bubble and I wouldn't have a "good" place to crop to. I don't clone.

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    This is what I had in mind.

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    Great images, the edit is really good, it draws more attention to the boy(love his expression) - the main subject - yet captures emotion in the little girl with her smile as well (and I love her shirt).

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    Re: bubbles and fun

    Passing the bubble boarder. An old one, 8 years ago.
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    Re: bubbles and fun

    Quote Originally Posted by pschlute View Post
    The second one is a very strong image. Getting down to the subject's level has made this one.
    Agreed

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