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10th May 2019, 01:08 PM
#1
Marnie
... or Marie I honestly don't remember. But anyway here she is the results of my first studio shoot.
![Marnie](http://i67.tinypic.com/xnal3d.jpg)
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10th May 2019, 10:25 PM
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11th May 2019, 05:03 AM
#3
Re: Marnie
Hi Paul, I am one of the last persons who should comment on portraits. Nevertheless, my observations are, that I like the first image ......... plus I would suggest sharpening the eyes (only). Her hair shows marvellously, but her eyes seems dull.
I will look forward to the comments of those much more qualified than me.
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11th May 2019, 07:56 AM
#4
Re: Marnie
Hi Paul, Like Jim I am the last person to be advising on portraiture. But...![Wink](https://cdn.cambridgeincolour.com/forums/images/smilies2/wink.png)
The second image works best for me. It has the look of a fashion shot. Marnie's outfit is what catches my eye rather than the model herself.
I think though that the first image of Marnie herself looks a little flat. I'd agree Jim's point about the the eyes being dull, but for me I find my eyes being drawn to her nose. I think you could tone down the the nose a little while sharpening the eyes and brightening slightly?
That said, I think you have done much better than I might have
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11th May 2019, 09:11 PM
#5
Re: Marnie
Thanks guys, yep the eyes could do with a little lift on the first shot. I'll get on it ... after my beer
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