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    Stream in the Park

    Stream in the Park

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Nice effort.

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Beautiful scenery

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Joe - overall a nice, pleasing image.

    The one thing that bothers me a bit is what the stream does along the bottom edge of the frame. It seems have a large, bright and distracting area. I wonder if a bit of a crop up to the rocks in the water might not be a more effective crop? That adds more of a frame to the image and keeps the viewer's eyes from dropping off the bottom of the shot.


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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Quote Originally Posted by Manfred M View Post
    Joe - overall a nice, pleasing image.

    The one thing that bothers me a bit is what the stream does along the bottom edge of the frame. It seems have a large, bright and distracting area. I wonder if a bit of a crop up to the rocks in the water might not be a more effective crop? That adds more of a frame to the image and keeps the viewer's eyes from dropping off the bottom of the shot.
    Yes something looks funky with the water at the bottom of the shot.. I will crop it closer and see if I can improve that area.

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Here is my effort:

    Stream in the Park

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    That crop works better for me too.

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Quote Originally Posted by Manfred M View Post
    That crop works better for me too.
    Thanks Manfred.

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    Re: Stream in the Park

    Quote Originally Posted by Wavelength View Post
    Beautiful scenery
    Thanks Nandakumar.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nice effort.
    Thank you.

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