Stream in the Park

[joebranko]

[Shadowman]

Nice effort.

[Wavelength]

Beautiful scenery

[Manfred M]

Joe - overall a nice, pleasing image.

The one thing that bothers me a bit is what the stream does along the bottom edge of the frame. It seems have a large, bright and distracting area. I wonder if a bit of a crop up to the rocks in the water might not be a more effective crop? That adds more of a frame to the image and keeps the viewer's eyes from dropping off the bottom of the shot.

[joebranko]

Joe - overall a nice, pleasing image.

The one thing that bothers me a bit is what the stream does along the bottom edge of the frame. It seems have a large, bright and distracting area. I wonder if a bit of a crop up to the rocks in the water might not be a more effective crop? That adds more of a frame to the image and keeps the viewer's eyes from dropping off the bottom of the shot.

Yes something looks funky with the water at the bottom of the shot.. I will crop it closer and see if I can improve that area.

[joebranko]

Here is my effort:

[Manfred M]

That crop works better for me too.

[joebranko]

That crop works better for me too.

Thanks Manfred.

[joebranko]

Beautiful scenery

Thanks Nandakumar.

[joebranko]

Nice effort.

Thank you.