Originally Posted by
Rufus
I still like your original composition, Andre, for reasons similar to those you have described so well, althought I still feel more headroom would have helped.
After several views, I have a couple of other observations. The rocks on the right are very sharply focused so a little gaussian blur might further guide the viewer to the fact that the main subject is the girl and the rocks are secondary. Also, you could try flipping the image on the centre vertical line so the girl is on the right so as we "read" the image from left to right we see the foreground, subject and blurred background. This can make a surprising difference to the way the brain perceives some images.