My nephew

[Javier]

[Manfred M]

Another beautifully done image Javier.

As always, my points are quite picky, so please don't let them detract from this well done picture.

1. Your logo should not be a significant compositional element of the picture. If you want to add it, make sure it is in a place where it is unobtrusive. The place you have put it detracts from the image.

2. The light is "too hot" and should be toned down a bit. This applies to the face, parts of the hat, the hand and the chair.

This is a portrait, so the face should stand out. The light is too bright on the hat, had and chair and detracts from the face, so burn all of these areas down in post. Do the face first to get it less bright and then adjust the other bright elements.




A few minutes of burning gives me something along these lines.

[Shadowman]

Nice effort, agree with comments already made.

[Javier]

Thanks guys