Justin - you need to click on the "Share Photo" icon at the bottom right area just below your image in Flickr and then copy and paste the BBcode into your post.
Justin - consider cropping the image so that any elements that do not add to the visual story you are telling. I'm not sure if the material on the right adds to the composition, so cropping it out (a fairly basic Photoshop feature) can result in a stronger image.