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    Can I let go now?

    The thought amused me.
    Can I let go now?

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    Re: Can I let go now?

    Love the caption. Clever.

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    bit to the left

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    Nicely seen and captured.

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    Re: Can I let go now?

    The flowers are a bit over exposed/saturated, particularly the reds. But perfection probably wasn't achievable with just one exposure and such a wide range of light levels.

    Do you need so much of the flowers? I wonder about losing a bit from the right side and going to something like 5 x 4 ratio?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    The flowers are a bit over exposed/saturated, particularly the reds. But perfection probably wasn't achievable with just one exposure and such a wide range of light levels.

    Do you need so much of the flowers? I wonder about losing a bit from the right side and going to something like 5 x 4 ratio?
    Thank you for your thoughts Geoff. Here it is in portrait format with the brown sections of the hedge cloned to be green and some adjustment to the flowers, too:

    Can I let go now?

    The crop is getting a bit severe and affecting the quality of the image (or maybe my editing is the root cause), and the bright spots over the head of the sculpture are becoming more prominent and distracting as is the OOF hedge. The flowers have not changed much. On balance, I think I prefer the previous version.

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    I think the biggest problem with the image is the top of the hedge in the background cuts right trough his shoulders. if one were doing a portrait shoot you would never pick such a background.

    I am well aware that the physical limitations of the shooting position means that unless David carries a step ladder in his camera bag he is never going to do this subject justice. A very common theme I find again and again with my own photos.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rufus View Post
    Thank you for your thoughts Geoff. Here it is in portrait format with the brown sections of the hedge cloned to be green and some adjustment to the flowers, too:

    Can I let go now?

    The crop is getting a bit severe and affecting the quality of the image (or maybe my editing is the root cause), and the bright spots over the head of the sculpture are becoming more prominent and distracting as is the OOF hedge. The flowers have not changed much. On balance, I think I prefer the previous version.
    Could be the flowers are detracting from the subject, David?

    I cranked down the saturation quite lot and then upped the mid-tone contrast and then gave a double-dose of unsharp mask at two different pixel radii, all in FastStone Viewer:

    Can I let go now?

    Voila, almost 3D ... pardon me for messing with it ...

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    Nicely done Ted.

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    Peter - I agree the hedge line is not ideal, but it is part of the garden scene and maybe, without it, a full height hedge would be quite a heavy background. As you say, we have to work within the limitations we encounter.

    Ted - In the original landscape format the flowers were like a carpet and part of the garden context. In the portrait format the flowers become less important. In the versions I have posted I had tried to add some "pop" to the colours of the flowers; but perhaps I should have left them alone, then they would be more like your versions albeit without the 3D effect! Thank you for showing what can be done and how.

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    Quote Originally Posted by billtils View Post
    Nicely done Ted.
    Thank you Bill.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rufus View Post
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    Ted - In the original landscape format the flowers were like a carpet and part of the garden context. In the portrait format the flowers become less important.
    Thanks, I understand, David.

    In the versions I have posted I had tried to add some "pop" to the colours of the flowers; but perhaps I should have left them alone, then they would be more like your versions albeit without the 3D effect!...
    Yes the flower colors, although not blown, were quite highly saturated (As a pedant should, I peeked at the saturation layer extracted in the GIMP).

    I found it interesting how color tends to draw the eye away from a neutral subject; playing with the saturation almost seemed to move the statue fore and aft.

    Thanks for posting a technically interesting image.

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    Re: Can I let go now?

    David - my views have been well addressed by Peter. I don't travel with a step ladder either.

    Ansel Adams, on the other hand. took shooting from up high to a new level and had taken the concept of an elevated shooting platform to a higher level (pun intended).

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