after dark is light

[vaez]

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which one is better?

[Shadowman]

Nice effort, the waves look a bit murky though and quite a bit of banding in the sky.

[vaez]

Nice effort, the waves look a bit murky though and quite a bit of banding in the sky.

Thank you dear friend
I have two more photos from here if I can send

[selig1656]

Clarity and focus seems off, the colored versions are better.

[Stagecoach]

which one is better?

Hi Vaez,

No 4 is my favourite and I believe you could improve it by straightening the horizon and adding some contrast/sharpening to the foreground. You could also consider changing the ratio to 16:9 and removing some from the bottom. Here's my thoughts.



Grahame

[mugge]

Vaez, #4 has a nice mood to it. I agree with Grahame about cropping some of the bottom, not too much. A very heavy border would also help and I am normally not in favour of borders but a large white border would frame the scene quite nicely.
Cheers Ole

[Shadowman]

Thank you dear friend
I have two more photos from here if I can send

Hi Vaez,

Yes, would like to see the other images.

[vaez]

Clarity and focus seems off, the colored versions are better.

thank you for your attention
Thank you for your choice

[vaez]

Hi Vaez,

No 4 is my favourite and I believe you could improve it by straightening the horizon and adding some contrast/sharpening to the foreground. You could also consider changing the ratio to 16:9 and removing some from the bottom. Here's my thoughts.



Grahame

Hi
Grahame
Dear friend, thank you very much for your complete explanation
Satisfaction with your help is a good friend on this site
I hope have can edit the photo
You mean 9 and 16?
If I understand correctly
Resize the photo?

[vaez]

Vaez, #4 has a nice mood to it. I agree with Grahame about cropping some of the bottom, not too much. A very heavy border would also help and I am normally not in favour of borders but a large white border would frame the scene quite nicely.
Cheers Ole

Thank you for guiding me
Thank you for your choice

[vaez]

Thank you for guiding me
Thank you for your choice

My dear friend my goal pictures 2, 3 and 4
I added
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