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    which one is better?
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    Re: after dark is light

    Nice effort, the waves look a bit murky though and quite a bit of banding in the sky.

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    Re: after dark is light

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nice effort, the waves look a bit murky though and quite a bit of banding in the sky.
    Thank you dear friend
    I have two more photos from here if I can send

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    Re: after dark is light

    Clarity and focus seems off, the colored versions are better.

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    Re: after dark is light

    Quote Originally Posted by vaez View Post
    which one is better?
    Hi Vaez,

    No 4 is my favourite and I believe you could improve it by straightening the horizon and adding some contrast/sharpening to the foreground. You could also consider changing the ratio to 16:9 and removing some from the bottom. Here's my thoughts.

    after dark is light

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    Re: after dark is light

    Vaez, #4 has a nice mood to it. I agree with Grahame about cropping some of the bottom, not too much. A very heavy border would also help and I am normally not in favour of borders but a large white border would frame the scene quite nicely.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: after dark is light

    Quote Originally Posted by vaez View Post
    Thank you dear friend
    I have two more photos from here if I can send
    Hi Vaez,

    Yes, would like to see the other images.

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    Re: after dark is light

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    Clarity and focus seems off, the colored versions are better.
    thank you for your attention
    Thank you for your choice

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    Re: after dark is light

    Quote Originally Posted by Stagecoach View Post
    Hi Vaez,

    No 4 is my favourite and I believe you could improve it by straightening the horizon and adding some contrast/sharpening to the foreground. You could also consider changing the ratio to 16:9 and removing some from the bottom. Here's my thoughts.

    after dark is light

    Grahame
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    Dear friend, thank you very much for your complete explanation
    Satisfaction with your help is a good friend on this site
    I hope have can edit the photo
    You mean 9 and 16?
    If I understand correctly
    Resize the photo?

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    Re: after dark is light

    Quote Originally Posted by mugge View Post
    Vaez, #4 has a nice mood to it. I agree with Grahame about cropping some of the bottom, not too much. A very heavy border would also help and I am normally not in favour of borders but a large white border would frame the scene quite nicely.
    Cheers Ole
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    Thank you for your choice

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    Thank you for guiding me
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    My dear friend my goal pictures 2, 3 and 4
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