Ted - the biggest area that has an issue, in my view, are the trees along the bottom edge. That large, textureless mass is problematic. There are a few areas in the clouds, especially on the left hand side and the top right hand corner that are not working for me either and we can see that these textures are in the original image that have been crushed in post.
More texture is generally more interesting than solid masses of pure black or pure white. Preserving that texture is a matter of technique (i.e. local adjustments = dodging and burning); in my experience, that ends up giving you a stronger image.