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    Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Was struck by the pose I had captured. Whilst the background was very bland, I thought I could jazz it up a bit.
    What do you think please?

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Very nice capture of the subject.

    Interesting choice of background versus subject colors. Almost "analogous":

    https://www.tigercolor.com/color-lab...-harmonies.htm

    I wonder if "complementary" (opposite) but less saturated background colors would have brought out subject more ... ?

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    I dont mind the background, but I find the subject lacking sharpness.

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Quote Originally Posted by xpatUSA View Post
    Very nice capture of the subject.

    Interesting choice of background versus subject colors. Almost "analogous":

    https://www.tigercolor.com/color-lab...-harmonies.htm

    I wonder if "complementary" (opposite) but less saturated background colors would have brought out subject more ... ?
    Well, Ted, it's not often that I have to check on the meaning of a word, but today and to check 'analogous'. I guessed at synchronicity, but was wrong. Apparently it means "comparable in certain respects, typically in a way which makes clearer the nature of the things compared."

    Anyway, many thanks for your feedback.

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Yes, Peter, this is cropped a lot. I have applied a smallish amount of high-pass filter sharpening.

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Nice effort, would've been more expressive if more of the body were visible.

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Sorry Jim - this one isn't working all that well for me. The softness of the missed focus and the solid background colours overwhelm your subject. What did the original background look like?

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    I think the image should be about the subject not the background
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Hi Manfred and Ole, here is the 'original', but as you say, missed focus.

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    Re: Dancer at Kumeu Show

    Regardless of the background the composition seems off for me , would crop the bottom up to the black top. The face seems to be lacking sharper detail (Out of focus).

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