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27th February 2020, 06:11 AM #1
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27th February 2020, 12:49 PM #2
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Re: The not quite right shopfronts
I like this.
If it's cropped, I think I would experiment with leaving little bit more at the top and bottom.
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27th February 2020, 02:12 PM #3Moderator
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Re: The not quite right shopfronts
I agree with Dan's comments about the crop along the top and bottom being a bit too tight. That gives the whole image a bit of a "cramped" feel to it.
I also find that the light colours on the top floor are a bit too "hot" whereas the shaded storefronts under the overhang are a bit too dark, so "calming" these areas a bit will give you a stronger image.
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27th February 2020, 08:30 PM #4
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Re: The not quite right shopfronts
An alternative would be to crop tighter at the top and go widescreen to concentrate more on the colourful shopfronts.
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28th February 2020, 05:30 AM #5
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Re: The not quite right shopfronts
Second try.
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29th February 2020, 08:12 PM #6
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Re: The not quite right shopfronts
Nice adjustments and a well done capture, as above the pic is seemingly cramped/tight.
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