The not quite right shopfronts

[mugge]

I liked the colours of the shopfronts. C&C most welcome.

The not quite right shopfronts by Ole Hansen, on Flickr

[DanK]

I like this.

If it's cropped, I think I would experiment with leaving little bit more at the top and bottom.

[Manfred M]

I agree with Dan's comments about the crop along the top and bottom being a bit too tight. That gives the whole image a bit of a "cramped" feel to it.

I also find that the light colours on the top floor are a bit too "hot" whereas the shaded storefronts under the overhang are a bit too dark, so "calming" these areas a bit will give you a stronger image.

[Geoff F]

An alternative would be to crop tighter at the top and go widescreen to concentrate more on the colourful shopfronts.

[mugge]

Second try.

The not quite right shopfronts by Ole Hansen, on Flickr

[selig1656]

Nice adjustments and a well done capture, as above the pic is seemingly cramped/tight.