Setting the matter of monitor lighting to one side, Dan, I see your post as two separate images and therein might lie the difficulty of balancing the whole admittedly spectacular scene.
At left, I see a Monet-esque scene with an artifact up against nature - a bit like his bridge in the garden:
Pardon the Monet-processing and the inappropriate A/R. I did turn down the reds, upped the green a bit, lowered the saturation and added a minimum of oil-paint effect. Upsized with Mitchell.
My background is "about mid-gray".
At right, a riotous scene of fall colors and reflections - subjects in their own right:
Pardon the cranked-up saturation and added micro-contrast, point being that you couldn't have done that to the whole scene. Again, the A/R is inappropriate. Upsized with Lanczos2 (sharper) but still ended up somewhat painterly, almost pointillistic.
That was my main reaction ... two scenes in one.