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28th March 2020, 09:53 PM
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28th March 2020, 10:51 PM
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Re: Antonia's Portrait
Javier - lovely portrait of a beautiful lady. I love the lighting on her but, I am not sure about the mesh...
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29th March 2020, 12:22 AM
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Re: Antonia's Portrait
Another very strong image, Javier - nicely done!
I agree with Richard, that soft material in front of your model's face is really more of a distraction than anything else and takes away from a strong image. Try to crop most of it out so that it is more of a prop and less of a distraction.
Shooting against a black background can be quite tricky as the subject's hair often merges with the background. I usually shoot with a hair light when shooting against black. You can dodge the hair a bit to open up the background some more, but nothing like what a hair light will do for you.
I might also think about opening up her eyes a bit. The light is not quite getting in there properly. Just a bit of fill from the bottom would be worth considering, but that gets you into a 3 light setup.
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