The Yarra

[Apo]

Please i need your expert comment about this photo, taken from Yarra River in Melbourne...



f13, 1/40s, ISO200 -2EV

[Donald]

Apo

Have you got a real name we can use (if that's not it)? Makes things much friendlier.

I like the composition on this. You've got a good angle with the bank of the river taking us nicely across and back into, the image. The bridge provides a nice reflection to 'lift' that part of the frame. You have the boat very well placed. So,in my view, a well constructed image.

[Skitalez]

Very nice colors!!!! Wonderful!!!

f13, 1/40s, ISO200 -2EV .......Tell Please A Focal length?????

[Apo]

Thanks Donald & Yegor for you comment im now inspired to take more shots....my real name is Dante.

25mm focal length.

[Donald]

Thanks Donald for you comment im inspired now to take more shots.

Wonderful. Go for it. And keep posting them up for comment. It's one of the best ways to learn.

[triggerhappy]

Nice capture.

[wilgk]

Having been there - I think it is very true to life (on a good day weather wise)

I also like your vantage point, the old station building nestled in amongst the new high rises, which work very well with the river for me.

[Peter Ryan]

Hi Dante,

Melbourne is my home town and this is a nice shot. I do like the perspective and the light is lovely.

The only comment I would make is that you could possibly have moved the camera to the right a little to get the full arch of the bridge; it feels a bit cut off to me. There is room on the left to move as there isn’t anything of special interest that would be lost. Having said that I am not sure what was further to the right. It might be messy and you have excluded it for a reason.

[Apo]

Hi Dante,

Melbourne is my home town and this is a nice shot. I do like the perspective and the light is lovely.

The only comment I would make is that you could possibly have moved the camera to the right a little to get the full arch of the bridge; it feels a bit cut off to me. There is room on the left to move as there isn’t anything of special interest that would be lost. Having said that I am not sure what was further to the right. It might be messy and you have excluded it for a reason.

Thanks for your comment Peter, yeah i think your right i did crop this one, i don't want to include the ramp on the right bottom of the picture.

And thank you all for the comments.....cheers.