Probably i don't get the feel you expected it to produce.....
A nice capture of a damselfly, but it looks a little soft--the right (viewer's left) eye in particular. However, it's hard to tell with such a small image size.
What is the first image? I can't figure it out.
They are not well defined especially the first one is too much noise and not in focus, not sure on the intent you wished to convey.keep on refining your concept.