The Corner

[Jim A]

Appeals to me but certainly won’t be to everyone’s taste! Taken on a visit to a local technological museum. Settings were f5.6 (sweet spot); ISO400; 38mms (57mms equiv); 1/640sec. on a Sigma 17-70 lens 2.8 to 4

[Wavelength]

I liked it

[Lon Howard]

The colors ARE compelling, Jim. Try a couple of quick and dirty things and see what you think. It seems to me that the shadows at the bottom distract from the vivid colors at the top. Try cropping them from the bottom up to maybe where they reach the right edge, and see if they accentuate those colors rather than distract from them. I might give a quick go at pumping up the vibrance but it was easy to take that too far when I tried it.

[mugge]

I agree with Lon regarding getting rid of the very strong shadow. Maybe, also, reduce the shine of the wall upper right corner.
Cheers Ole

[Wavelength]

Regarding the shadow, i have a different feeling; i feel some way it adds to the composition....