Camila

[Javier]

[Manfred M]

Another nice attempt, but the lighting here is just not working very well. If you look at where the light is falling; the hat, her clothing and parts of the legs and where it is not, the face, shows the key problems with this shot. Light for the face.

I also wonder about the orientation; you've shot in portrait orientation but the way the body flows, landscape might be a better choice. The crop is tight on the left and right, but there is all kinds of unnecessary space above her head. The hair and toes are a bit tight. Also watch where the irises are in the eyes; they are pulled too far to the camera left side and look a bit strange.

[selig1656]

Composition is nice, the lighting is lacking.