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    Dreams

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    Re: Dreams

    This is one of my favorites from your postings. I find the closed-eye pose very effective. Not certain about the bright light on the sweater.

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    Re: Dreams

    It's a lovely shot Javier; children can make wonderful subjects.

    I agree with Daniel about the light coming through the hole onto her shawl; it doesn't work for me either. I find it is quite distracting. The light on her dress is less of an issue. I also don't like that one flower poking up in the middle of the shot, it is distracting as well.

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    Re: Dreams

    I have to agree with the other posters about the distractions of the light and the flower, but she is a lovely girl and the pose is charming

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    Re: Dreams

    Great portriat and as above the light subtracts from a uniform capture, this is still a great pic due to the subject.

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    Re: Dreams

    Charming portrait.

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    Re: Dreams

    A lovely portrait but with a couple of problems as mentioned above. These would have been easy to fix at the time, horribly difficult now (same story as many of my shots).

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