I think this is a good capture, but if it were mine, I would do more with it. It's relatively low in contrast, which partly obscures the contrast between the burnt trees and new growth. I'd crop, particularly from the left, to focus more on the interesting lines and contrasts in the center. Here's a very quick and dirty edit just to show the directions I was thinking about. I just increased midtone contrast modestly, boosted vibrance (but not saturation), sharpened more (a high pass filter, which I use when lines are particularly important--1.0 pixel, 50 percent opacity, overlay blend), and cropped. Is this a direction worth exploring?