Thanks, Sharon, for your comment. I will try processing it in a couple of days. There is a lot of clutter, but that's the eviorment. I like to think it contributes to the story.
+1 to what Sharon has written. There are too many distractions in this image for it to be effective. Open up the shadows and take down the highlights, especially the window at the top left and you will have made a good start. Much of the top part of the image is not contributing to the image and can be cropped out.
That bright white shirt and the shoes are not working all that well either.