Helpful Posts: Sony A6500 with 85mm f/1.8 lens wide open
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Thread: Portrait
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3rd February 2022, 01:32 AM #1
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3rd February 2022, 04:57 AM #2
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Re: Portrait
Very nice portrait, Richard! I like that the f1.8 aperture allows the model's face and head to be in-focus while imparting a softness to the rest of the frame.
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3rd February 2022, 10:36 AM #3
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Re: Portrait
Lovely portrait Richard
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3rd February 2022, 11:07 AM #4
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I would like a bit more space above the girl's head and maybe change the colour of the girl's right dress strap to match her left dress strap.
These are just my observations of a lovely image.
Cheers Ole
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4th February 2022, 03:14 AM #5
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Re: Portrait
Very nicely done, lovely model.
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4th February 2022, 05:26 AM #6
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Thanks! I also think that she is lovely. She is also a active duty U.S. Marine!
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4th February 2022, 06:47 PM #7
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Re: Portrait
Another image from this shoot
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4th February 2022, 06:55 PM #8
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Re: Portrait
I prefer that version, with more space at the top and slightly reduced highlights.
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5th February 2022, 11:19 AM #9
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I agree with Geoff. The first image is a bit cramped. This one is vastly better. And yes! she is lovely.
Cheers Ole
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6th February 2022, 03:25 AM #10
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Re: Portrait
I don't often comment on portraits, Richard, because it is an area I don't feel confident about. Nevertheless, I do like both images a lot. I agree with Ole about more space on the top for the first. Overall, I prefer the second quite a bit more, because of the challenging look which gives drama and her positioning.
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