Jess

[Javier]

[Manfred M]

This image is not nearly as strong as the previous one of this model.

You have put most of the light on her back; light the face well as that is critical to your image making. The crop at the top (the feather) and the camera right hand are awkward and draw too much attention. The wall clock competes too much with your model and should not be there.

[Jim A]

Without a doubt, Javier, I am not as discerning at Manfred. Nevertheless, the inclusion of the clock jarred with me too.

[billtils]

It's a nice mono but it doesn't come close to your superb "Jessika" for composition, attitude of the model, and overall interest.