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The pretty River Wylie passes by the famous Wilton carpet factory on its way through the centre of Wilton.
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19th May 2022, 10:11 AM #1
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TheRiver Wylie passes through the town of Wilton
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20th May 2022, 06:16 AM #2
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Re: TheRiver Wylie passes through the town of Wilton
Good to see you again, Chris, and to enjoy viewing your images.
Philip
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22nd May 2022, 02:19 PM #3
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Re: TheRiver Wylie passes through the town of Wilton
This is an intriguing image, but if it were mine, I would do more editing.
First, the tonality draws the eye to the foregound because the interesting building back left is both dark and low in contrast. I'd dodge and burn to change that on boost contrast in the building, all using a brush. Here's a quick and dirty edit:
I think I'd also crop. The windows front right and barbeque grill front left are distractions that don't really add, IMHO. Maybe something like this:
This does lose some of the wide-angle perspective, but I think it might work better.
Does any of this seem like reasonable directions to you?
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