Nara

[Javier]

[rpcrowe]

I really like this image!

[John 2]

I really like this image!

So do I. The tonality is spot on.

[Cantab]

So do I. The tonality is spot on.

I also agree!

[Manfred M]

Nicely done Javier - a few minor points you might want to watch the next time:

1. Her toes and the edge of the material she has been wrapped in come very close to the edge of the frame. Both are minor but still a bit distracting; and

2. Watch how your model positions her eyes. They are turned hard to the camera right side so there is a lot of white on one side of the iris and none on the other. The eye does not have to be centred, but there should be some white visible on both sides or the iris. Otherwise the eyes do look a little strange.

[Javier]

Thanks Manfred
Always are a pleasure read your opinion and coments

[Jim A]

Great comments from Manfred, Javier, we are both so lucky to learn!

[Rita]

Nicely done Javier. Every time you post a portrait I see improvement in your work.