It smells like Christmas! please critique!

[UtopianStardust]

What do you think of these? It smelled so yummy. I couldn't wait 'till I finished taking pictures so I took a bite out of it's arm! x)

[Donald]

What do you think of these?I

**HEADLINE** --- Youngest CiC member seriously assaults Gingerbread Man. Modertors demand that a piece is sent to them as it looks so good !" ---

Have a lovely holiday time UtopianStardust. It's great having you as part of CiC.

[UtopianStardust]

**HEADLINE** --- Youngest CiC member seriously assaults Gingerbread Man. Modertors demand that a piece is sent to them as it looks so good !" ---

Have a lovely holiday time UtopianStardust. It's great having you as part of CiC.

Funny! x)
Have a happy holiday!

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Utopia,

These are quite good, as we've come to expect from you.

I think you've got the focus point about right, the interest, perhaps gruesomely, is on the 'point of dismemberment' and the texture within, rather than the surface or facial features.

Other thoughts;
A bit more DoF might have been useful - there's no EXIF data provided, or in images, so I don't know what you used.
On the first, a clone extension of the white background into the top right corner would have helped a little.
I am undecided whether the WB should be on the background, the icing or the plate, you seem to have it on the background, which I'm not sure is best for the scene, however, it is one of those things I'd have to try the alternatives and take a view on which is best, choosing one of the others may make the lighting sheen on surface coloured and that wouldn't look right.
Both the compositions are fine.

Hope that helps,