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    Will I Catch Anything?

    C&C welcomed. Bruce

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    Re: Will I Catch Anything?

    Too much uninteresting road. You could crop away about half of the road with a similar amount from the left side to create a stronger scene.

    Otherwise, this looks good to me.

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    Is this any better? Bruce


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    That is much better, Bruce, although the rod tip is now a bit close to the right edge. I would have been willing to allow a fraction more road to remain in order to give a little more space there.

    Cropping, and original framing of a scene, is always variable and compromises usually have to be made.

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    Re: Will I Catch Anything?

    Two other points about the image as presented here:
    1. The background house seems to indicate that the image could be straightened by a small clockwise rotation.
    2. The title indicates that the subject is the fisherman and his rods, but the background house is distracting the viewer.
    Perhaps after the rotation a more severe crop might work.

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    Philip, I see your point.

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    Is this any better?

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    Re: Will I Catch Anything?

    Looking better, Bruce. I am not overly concerned about the houses because, although that tends to create two points of interest, it does give a bit of context to the scene. Maybe slightly tone down the house brightness though.

    It is a scene with many options so it will be up to you to try a few variations then go with whatever most pleases you.

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    Re: Will I Catch Anything?

    Quote Originally Posted by Digital View Post
    Is this any better?
    It is, Bruce, but I think you should also apply Geoff's suggestion to remove more of the road.

    Cheers.
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